Doors..

The Dark shadows cast upon

Is it someone's curse?

Or is it Destiny?

Or is it the almighty desire?

The Dark Clouds of personal choices; 

Is it forever or what?

Or is it the test of time? 

When everything can end; 

Why is it still that I can't read the last verse?

When I know that there is a new beginning, 

past this darkness..

Why can't I open the door? 

And let the wind take its course..

The dark chamber needs the gust of freshness 

And the gale is just 'round the corner 

Why is that my fingers are numb 

Each time I try to pull open 

The sealed metal doors of my broken heart?

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

its not a curse,or anyone desire,its just simply life ,thats how it works
dont expect anything from her,just leave it there,dont struggle too much
dont expect an end,and dont play with her,just let go,put on a sad face
and welcome all the darkness to come,thats life,when you never expect
anything anymore,then she wont play ,its a game,if you play it well
you win or the least you wont lose a lot,just let go,smooth apex
and indifference,thats the most she hates,never run after her,and she lose
lovely write

[Vikrantsingh]

Question and answers exactly amends are perfect to create an art.
Simplifying door in these words below.
"The Dark Clouds of personal choices;
Is it forever or what?
Or is it the test of time? "

Efforts are put-in properly I won't comment as Jacob already did that part.

Quite understood it with single go and must visit your page oftenly

Cheers!!
Singh :)

[PP]

Thank you Vikant...I owe you good few reviews now! Just slightly over-worked these days but I will soon do when I have grabbed some time in my pocket :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Lol thanks you must keep dropping few more good poems of yours i simply loved them :)

[PP]

bless you...thank you ever so much. I always try and squeeze some time out for this site...you will definitely see more coming :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Sure, same here lol i'm on my desk and reviewing poem's if my boss checks this he would kill me with his little finger :D

[PP]

hahaha...give him a dose of poetry and he will run away!

[Vikrantsingh]

Lol mostly they do stay away coz im not good with my mood swings.
have to work on it
need to meditate more no. of hours. :D

[PP]

haaaaaa...meditation! The last thing on my list ever!

[Vikrantsingh]

You must try it helps a lot, need to follow it, its worth

[PP]

Staying quiet is not my cup of tea! I have to express thats just me...sitting quiet and meditating is just a torture to me!! LOL

[Vikrantsingh]

Hahahahahaha he just checked my Blackberry am i cracking some nuts lol he is simply annoying manager :x

[PP]

Kick his a*s!! LOL

[Vikrantsingh]

Roflamo :D :x

[PP]

lol

[Ami Bovurd]

wen one door opens dey say anuder one closes lol - or sumthing like dat lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think you will eventually get it open...sometimes it takes ages to mend a broken heart...and then that person appears on the other side of the door, and it gives you strength. enough to get the fingers moving..

jacob

[PP]

Thank you for the shine of positivity Jacob :)

[Sami Khalil]

All are good questions in a good poem...:)

[PP]

Answers please :(

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha... It costs money...Lol just kidding...:)

[PP]

Now Now..I shall reward you whatever you deserve for those answers! lol

[Sami Khalil]

Open up your heart and soul to the field of love energy in the universe and let your heart echoes the beauty of spirit's nature within and physical nature without and when the divine fills you with his blessings and wisdom then you will be a child of heaven and an angel of mercy .
All the answers are within your deep well which I call the higher self and the more you vanish your lower self ( the ego ) the more you elevate your true essence to touch all truth...:)

[PP]

Thank you Sami, means a lot this piece, think you deserve a laurel!

[Sami Khalil]

I'll accept that and your friendship...You are welcoem...:)

[PP]

I am much pleased, indeed no word of lie..hands on heart Sami thank you for at least trying to answer some of my questions ::)

[Sami Khalil]

Good to know. You have a friend here...:)

[PP]

Absolutely :)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)