Keeper of her dreams

At the end if a very dark alley
Stood a faint figurine...
She was in great haste
Being chased by a devil
As she tread upon the wobbly brick pavement
With high heels of disgrace
A twist in the ankle ceased her steps..
The figurine wasn't very inviting
Nor was it sympathising
Knowing that she is inches away
From the perils of the monster
She tossed in the air
Delicately yet very uncaringly
Her hopes packed away tightly in a container
That strange figurine
That uninviting stranger
Now became 'The Keeper of her Dreams'

Author's Note

May be start of another series:)

Reviews

[Jeff]

This is very intriguing. I'd like to read more about this story.

[Sami Khalil]

It looks to me that someone has moved away from an old life style to a new life full of dreams where the man( or angel she encountered ) she found is the keeper of her dreams now...A splendid read and write...:)

[Frieda P]

Hauntingly & darkly eerie, reading between the lines here I'd say this angel took a dark detour and went down the wrong alley...her soul belongs to the devil now....!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

At the end of a very dark alley
Stood a faint figurine...
She was in great haste
Being chased by a devil
As she tread upon the wobbly brick pavement
With high heels of disgrace
A twist in the ankle ceased her steps..
The figurine wasn't very inviting
Nor was it sympathizing
Knowing that she is inches away
From the perils of the monster
She tossed into the air
Delicately yet very uncaringly
Her hopes packed away tightly in a container
That strange figurine
That uninviting stranger
Now became 'The Keeper of her Dreams'

Quite a faith for her to meet this deity…and now be suck in a bottle like a pet of sort…I did notice a couple area needing editing…the stuff we all love to do with our work…seems you have other plans with this verse...

[Rhiti Bose]

Prathama, This is so haunting, I had goosebumps reading it.

That uninviting stranger
Now became 'The Keeper of her Dreams'

Your pen works magic I must say. Brilliant.

[PP]

Many many thanks I am flattered Rhiti :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i saw a prostitute selling her love, but feeling nothing...like a little statue...she hopes some day that she will find real love...but on that pavement? she may always just be a figurine...

[PP]

always appreciate your interpretation of my work:) thank you Jacob :)

[Jack...]

Dream-like my friend. Very nicely done.

[PP]

Thank you Jack, much appreciate your review :)