Drifting

When I listen to that song perched on a solitary rock 

Lost in fixation with the setting sun and its glow 

I leave my heart wide open  to let go of pain 

With a cry of happy tears I step up in advance 

To feel a little change of hope;

I lay there and gaze 

I feel I should let more things happen 

Care less about missed moments 

Fear less about what is far behind and left back. 

Let go, let go of what I have in my mind..

Un-burden that shoulder of remorse 

Like a melting ray fades away my soul   

Yet it knows not where it is going..

To search for you in the vast infinity..

 

Reviews

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Beautifully penned. Nice work ;)

[Sami Khalil]

I was drifting in those wonderful lines although sad...Bravo.............................

[PP]

Tear drop of happiness Sami, thank you for feeling this poem :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)...........................

[PP]

............:)

[Sami Khalil]

:)........................

[Frieda P]

I love that first line, and the last stanza could stand on it's own...not crazy about the pink font, but that's just me, loved it Tink!

[PP]

hahaha...not too keen on pink either, guess it was the pink mood. How are you?

[Frieda P]

Oh you know, ask me in another minute and the mood changes. ;-) Yourself? You ever get that business going?

[PP]

Nahhhh not yet, still stuck in with things as you know! Has things come to normality at your end? x

[Frieda P]

Nope, same old...you know how that goes dealing with it firsthand yourself........x

[PP]

You know what the 'pain' in this poem exactly refers to, don't you?

[Frieda P]

All too well..................

[PP]

ayeeee :) x

[Frieda P]

Chin up, they tell me it has to get better, fingers crossed for both of us xx

[PP]

thanks hunny :) xx Here for each other :)

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Beautiful work you painted here:)

[PP]

Thank you Jonathan, much appreciated :)

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it was my pleasure friend:)

[PP]

Much pleasure to have you here :)

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Awwwww now don't get me crying here lol:) that was sweet dear friend:)

[PP]

awwwwwww...don't LOL :)

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Smilesssssssssssss joy tears are worth all:)

[MrKnowAll]

the song mentioned only once, plays a huge role in the drift, and it is written in such amazing manner. So much imagery done through a small setting sun drift, and how the clarity is beyond understanding. and so the soul drifts , seeking unknown treasure.
I leave wondering : what song? who is he in the vast infinity? why so much pain ?

[PP]

Longing for something creates great poems, anticipation makes amazing poets :) Thank you great poet for such a kind review :)

[MrKnowAll]

indeed true, patience :)

[PP]

...:) :) :)