Pursuit of felony

In your pursuit of felony

You beg forgiveness 

Yet you chase the infamous dragon 

as if it resurrects your mortal self -

Casting a shadow of malice 

upon hearts of those who love..

Your intentions well justified with reasoning

But nothing makes sense to me at all.. 

  

Reviews

[A. Amos]

But nothing makes sense to me at all.. 

Above line was essence of your piece, good job

[oasisscott]

Nothing would make sense unless you've chased after the dragon yourself.you have though unfortunately suffered the wrath of the dragon and been burnt by its fiery breath that hurts and destroys everyone and everything in its path regardless of the consequences alas the dragon now has its talon firmly hooked In My body and with the other claw the dragon is holding my ripped out bleeding heart. Been Indian Prathama not sure if you will know the legend of George and the dragon but sadly in our case the dragon is not the one that has been slain but I am the one who has stood on the edge of danger for so long and is now paying the eternal price of loss.

[DIVYA]

Very powerful. It could mean a lot of things to me. I liked it so much Prathama.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, yes, the begging for forgiveness...but all the time there is the felony of empty sincerity..

[Frieda P]

It's indeed a crime, and I know exactly where this one is coming from, it breaks my heart and makes me want to cry, know what you're dealing with Tink...aptly pen'd, you nailed it!

[PP]

thank you Frieda, these words are the heart's truest feelings! Love poetry because I don't need to hide the pain with a smile :)

[Frieda P]

Exactly how I feel Tink. x