As the night falls and the darkness dawns

Senseless recollections of the horrible past 

Haunt nightmares of solitary nights 

Love of a different kind attacks the body 

To sweat and wriggle under the blanket of horror

Meaningless thoughts breed inside the head 

Occupy the heart with terror and despair 

So overpowering that the room is filled 

with silent screams and fearful echos 

Like a shadow, the past is always around

Grabs hold of the mind, body and soul 

Effortless struggle leaves restless blemishes 

All over and everywhere 

As the night falls and the darkness dawns 

Less of life blood flows through the vein 

As the night falls and the darkness dawns 

All over and everywhere 

Comes to life does the past even more..

 

 

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

All over and everywhere
As the night falls and the darkness dawns
Less of life blood flows through the vein
As the night falls and the darkness dawns
All over and everywhere
Comes to life does the past even more..

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I wonder if you wanted to use that in the beginning of this write also...its a darker write as to the meaning of the overview of this write...as I mentioned above something like this:

All over and everywhere
As the night falls and the darkness dawns
Less of life blood flows through the vein
As the night falls and the darkness dawns
All over and everywhere
Comes to life does the past even more.

Senseless recollections of the horrible past
Haunt nightmares of solitary nights
Love of a different kind attacks the body
To sweat and wriggle under the blanket of horror
Meaningless thoughts breed inside the head
Occupy the heart with terror and despair
So overpowering that the room is filled
with silent screams and fearful echos
Like a shadow, the past is always around
Grabs hold of the mind, body and soul
Effortless struggle leaves restless blemishes

All over and everywhere
As the night falls and the darkness dawns
Less of life blood flows through the vein
As the night falls and the darkness dawns
All over and everywhere
Comes to life does the past even more.

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seems incomplete as is...but as always its my observation of this work...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that is when it seems to come to light the most...in the darkness, the past haunts, and does its job too well.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Very deeply spoken:)))))))))))))))))))))

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I know in the stillness of the night I sometimes think too much and create fears in my head that don't exist. A very chilling poem, I mean that in a good way.

[ANM]

Good writing very impactive! Well done... Night is night

[Anand Sehgal]

Void creates more sound , and I heard its reverberation through your poem. Very good write :)
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[Sami Khalil]

"Like a shadow, the past is always around

Grabs hold of the mind, body and soul

Effortless struggle leaves restless blemishes

All over and everywhere

As the night falls and the darkness dawns "

A plethora of emotions and images conveyed by past recollections and with silent screams echoing the hollowness of the fearful echoes. A darkly write but one that is far from darkness...Bravo

[PP]

Thanks Sami, guess my writings are getting darker and darker day by day! I hope too light them up soon :)

[Sami Khalil]

Good. You are welcome...:)................