The Girl I Loved Most

This is from the night I miscarried.

Under that starry sky, I lie and watch the Earth.

I smiled as I touch my stomach, Anticipating your birth.

I walk to the bedroom, Wishing to sleep.

It is your heart, I solemnly keep.

Daddy was mean to mommy, He hurt you and I.

A fight ensued, I didn't expect you to die.

I went to the hospital, The doctors told me you went away.

In this world, I didn't want to stay.

I needed my little girl, Mommy's little angel.

God needed you more, My beautiful Archangel.

I hope you like your new home, I'll see you one of these days.

On the other side, Of those pearly gates.

I miss you more, And it hurts.

I only want, I wish my life reverts.

I love you Savana, My precious girl.

Know that you, Are mommy's world.

Rest In Peace

~8/23/10~

Author's Note

I would appreciate feedback, thank you.

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Damn Brittany this made me tear up... nothing worse than losing a child... it is my worst nightmare. I am sorry you had to go through that no one deserves that. You are a strong woman to write about it... stay strong!

[Brittany]

Thank you. It's what carries my burdens. I've been through a lot and I must admit writing and music are my biggest tools in helping keep my head up.

[AaronFreitas]

That is awesome... the same for me with writing and music! Stay strong you know you always have a friend in me to talk to if you want or need to :)

[Brittany]

Thank you very much, and the same to you (:

[Samuel Dickens]

This is truly heart-wrenching, expressing pain and despair of a kind I can only try to imagine. You've written it with both skill and experience. I wouldn't change a thing. May peace and healing be yours.

[Brittany]

Thank you much.