My Graffiti Poem

A poem I wrote after my fiance jumped out of the car while I was driving...

There Are No Words To

Describe How Someone Jumping Out of A

Car Makes You Feel

Just

A Fistful of S****y Emotions

That Range From

Anger, Sadness, Jealousy, Self-Loathing, Loathing, Hatred, Heart-Break

Loneliness, Alienation, Unworthy, Useless, Livid, Seething

But The Worst

Thing of All

Is Knowing You Didn't Love me Enough

To Stick It Out

You Didn't Know Me Well Enough

That I Didn't Really Mean It

AND You Didn't Care Enough to Think 

How This Would Affect OUR Family

ME

YOU

JASMINE

Reviews

[ATG]

A sad, but well written poem. Making each word capitalized was interesting choice that added a little something extra to the poem. Made the feeling of all those negative emotions come across better. Overall, a well written poem.

[scribe?]

like how the anger and frustration on the surface chops off your lines at unexpected places at the beginning, leading into the release of a deluge of the sadness underneath at the end

[pinpen]

such a sad write, so well expressed

[Allen Smuckler]

poignant and honestly felt Sara
Ain't catharsis grand ...we get it off our chest and feel good when we finish..maybe not right away....but soon...
anybody who jumps out a moving car, you don't really want in you life anyway...too dangerous.
Well done and welcome
allen

[khalid]

nicely written poem, nice images you have drown, nice words picking. although it is a real sad frustrating poem, you managed to make the reader feel that what means you could transfer your feelings to th reader. really great work..

[Michael G.]

This is sad, and I'm sure frustrating for you.
Good luck in ironing this out.
I hope he at least landed comfortably and didn't try this at sixty miles an hour.