Ripples- Haiku

Wanted to write a deep haiku about the self.

 

Droplet of water

Faint fragment of memories

Shower upon me

Reviews

[poetdweller]

Lots of people don't realize that a few words can mean so much. The beautiful scheme of a Haiku is one of my favorites, along with freewrite. You're amazing.

[Rainbowco]

Lovely

[Windy]

WEll Done. A few words but very telling. Windy

[Pj]

Wow it's amazing how much depth comes from so little...wonderful!

[Midnight Rose ~*Anna Ro..]

Very deep indeed, I love haikus I just never managed to write one on my own. Three simple lines say so much. Nicely done.

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

short, deep, very meaningful. i love it. :D ill be comming back to read more later sometime. great poem.