One Breath- Haiku

 

One moment one breath

The wind of the moment strikes

Fate has no mercy

Author's Note

Poem of seizing the moment. A kendo idea of taking the initiative at the right time.

Reviews

[Jo Anna Bella]

Powerful, captures the essence of the moment...could be when life springs forth, death arrives, a loving moment or battle. Kudos!

[StrangeVoices]

When I read it I thought of striking at the right time in a battle, guess that shows how violence flows through my mind.

I like it, people can interpret it differently and it still holds the same meaning no matter how it is interpreted.