Civil War

This is a Poem i made a few years ago about the civil war when i was learning about it in S.S.

Cavalry and Infantry fight and yell

Inept is many who try and fail

Valiantly some opted for peace

Inevitable was a war to be

Long, Bloody, Vicious, and Wrong

War swept this nation with its terrible gong

Ashen faced Brothers lie in puddles of each others gore

Redemption of a race was a result of that War

Reviews

[Thoctar]

Nice! I may be Canadian, but really this works for any civil war in general. Picture also adds to feel

[Ruth]

A beautiful piece love!
War is something I am strongly against and this strikes a nreve :) That gong resonates!
Awesome!
xx