Aligning Diamonds

She gingerly aligned glinting diamonds

thereupon unlocking adorned cosmoses'

vested secrets from time periods agone

and prevailing mesmerized mysteries

flickering 'tween concerted galaxies,

awaiting farthermost never-ending stardust  

of kindred spirits' infinitely enlivened,

collective at last amongst boundless sempiternity

Reviews

[Diamond]

This is beautiful. The picture of "all that is", that you portrayed sets mind and heart at peace.

[1VJ]

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks Queen.

[andrew mitchell]

Beautiful imagery,your words displayed the heavens above so well

[1VJ]

Thanks so much Andrew.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I have always been mesmerized by the brilliance of the sky - the stars, the planets, how they all align for us to gaze upon and fall in love with. Your words are such a gorgeous orchestration of beauty and wonder, and the photo - simply gorgeous!

[1VJ]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my stargazing, thanks so much Kelly!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'd really love to use this graphic - may I?

[1VJ]

Sure, I don't recall where I found it, so I can't give credit but have at it!

[Alice Poésy]

This is pure magic, rich with vivid imagery. You managed to summarise the beautiful mysteries of the skies in such a few lines that flowed together ever so smoothly.

You have an interesting voice. I will definitely be dropping by again.

[1VJ]

Thanks for this glowing review Alice, I'll be by your page again soon too.

[Sami Khalil]

Mesmerizing words and imagery. Beauty upon beauty...:)................

[1VJ]

Wow, mesmerizing, thanks Sami! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ...:))))).......

[Daisy]

Remarkable choice of words! You made the starry heavens come alive through your beautiful manifestations. This indeed is a beautiful thought-provoking piece. Keep it up :)

[1VJ]

Thanks Daisy, much appreciated! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing use of description. The words danced gently create thoughts and visions. Thank you Paloma for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[1VJ]

Thank you for your attentive review Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Lydia Shutter]

"sempiternity" what a great word to describe the galaxy. Yes, star gazing on a clear night is a magical pastime. A beautiful celestial write, Paloma. Lydi**

[1VJ]

Thanks so much Lydi.