Somethig Sexy

well...it was 4 in the morning n i was like really horny so i wrote this.

my fantasies to be fullfilled...waiting...ant

icipating...wondering...will it happen? yearning for his touch...lusting for his kiss...aching for his.... [well u know] to take control of me
love me
hurt me sexually
i wanna scream for him
i'm screaming for him....moaning. loving. wanting
oh the passion
the heat...i need sex
i admit it
i need sex
not just sex
i need his sex
i wanna feel him inside me
thrusting...moaning, panting, kissing
hearts pounding
mind racing
tongue dancing
hands shaking
legs weak...fall into your arms...
oh f**k yes!!
thrusting deeper inside me
i'm loving every second of this pleasure/pain
oh dont stop!
harder
faster
hold me
tell me what you want
i dont let him hold back
i dont hod back
i need his sex
i need sex
what is this feeling?

Reviews

[Airila]

Aww thanks a lot dude

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is amazing .... i love it !!!!!!!

[iron9567]

lol Hmmm where to start, where to start. Question is did you ever get the happy answer to this poem from him? I think you need to add some of these lines together to help out the flow better. To show what i mean I'll post your poem in the format im talking about.

my fantasies to be fullfilled...
waiting...anticipating...wondering...
will it happen?
yearning for his touch..lusting for his kiss
aching for his.... [well u know] to take control of me
love me
hurt me sexually
i wanna scream for him
i'm screaming for him....moaning. loving. wanting
oh the passion the heat...i need sex
i admit it i need sex
not just sex
i need his sex
i wanna feel him inside me
thrusting...moaning, panting, kissing
hearts pounding,mind racing
tongue dancing,
hands shaking,legs weak
fall into your arms...oh f**k yes!!
thrusting deeper inside me
i'm loving every second of this pleasure/pain
oh dont stop!,
harder,faster,hold me
tell me what you want
i dont let him hold back
i dont hold back
i need his sex
i need sex
what is this feeling?

Just a suggestion take em or leave them. Nice poem keep em coming.