Just the Rain

I'm not crying,

It's just the rain.

Can't you see?

The drops are plain.

Me, sad? Uh, uh, no way.

I'm fine, okay? Now go away.

Please, just leave me be.

All you're doing is annoying me.

Really, I'll be fine, on my own.

Now, please, I just want to be alone.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Neon]

It's an emotional and a painful poem but the flow's really very cool. Nice work.

[lee von cleef]

Bella, Bella like your poem I love the sound, second of June a very good day I am looking forward to it again this year,maybe it will rain again, I feel a song coming on,let it rain!

[junaid altaf]

so u have realised ur potential.......
the poem stands for it.............

[PurpleQuartz]

I like the way you wrote this poem. I can really imagine the person saying this.

[Phillitup]

I like the rhymes. It is a very sad write, emotional and all. I clicked with this piece. Sometimes I just want to be alone.

[P.S.Chance]

I have a feeling the person doesn't really want to be alone which makes it very sad.

[Brielle Cartny]

I feel this with some of my friends. Good write!

[Allyson Wolfe]

It's an interesting write with a good rhyme scheme and is effective, but I also feel that there is not as much depth in it. Good write though !