In your lust

Well this is one of my 2018 poems.It is just a blend of wanting love in emotional and physical form.

I fell in love with you
Here I'm falling in love with you again
With sparks that you make in my virgin blood,
Lips that travel all over my chest ,
Pain that you cause me each night and day,
Love that bleeds from my heart.
Such a beast you are
Such a maniac I am.
Tear me apart under your claws
Let me relive my life once more.
Strike me with your hunger.
Eat me like a vulture
Let me relive my life once more
Dive the deepest of mine.
Scratch me with your eyes
Scratch me with your lips
Scratch me with your tongue
Scratch me with your love.
Let me relive my life once more.
Let your love usher on me like never before.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Wondrously stunning, Parsa 🌾

What romantic soul could resist such a richly imaginative title(?) … especially, when it leads to the poetically beautiful throes of tender passion, gentle warmth, and a love so vibrantly desired, as the promise of honey lures a hungry bee to pollen.
Yet, entwined within your words and lines … though, written years ago … there still breathes the beats of a desperate heart, ready and willing to surrender unto the objective of its affection.
I could go on, but let me close, lest I wear my welcome thin, by saying, "In reading this excellently rendered piece, it soon dawned on me that you're not just another pretty face … you also wield a wonderfully talented pen."

I thank you most sincerely, Parsa, for presenting your fine work at our grateful pleasure.
Peace and love 'pon thee! ⁓ Richard 🍃

I'm amazed that I'm the only one to review this lovely poem???
Lucky me. : )

[Parsa]

O my god Richard thank you so much.You made my day!!!!And please let me say this,your review is more beautiful than my poem,and I mean it.
You have described my poem so eloquently that I myself couldn't express.
It was an utter joy for me and honor to have you reviewing my poem.
Thank you so muchhhh

[Richard🖌]

You're so VERY welcome, Parsa 🥀
My words of expression, praise, and appreciation were spontaneously inspired by your own.🌞

It is I who thank You, Dear Lady-Poet.