Stitches

Stitches

A Poem by Raven

 If I was to fall apart,
Would you even care?
Would you have a needle and string,
to stitch back the broken pieces?
'cause I know I can't myself,
When I'm lonesome,I feel broken,
When I try to fix the problem,
Everything falls apart,
I'm grieving,dying,bleeding for you,
My soul is torn open,
pouring all my feelings,
that rain down on you,
Please,please show me you care,
mend and stitch my broken heart,
Beg it to beat,so it'll beat for you,
for the love of god,don't let it die,
or really don't sit and let me cry.

© 2009 Raven


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A Gem. Wonderful imagery! You took a common theme (Falling Apart) and made it your own.
This poem is original and one of my favorites. It should come with a Disclaimer. A person who reads
this in front of the right person may end up with a bf/gf. lol

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 14, 2009

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Hi My name is Raven My favorite band is Kill Hannah Music=Life I love to write stories and every once in a while, poems. I guess that's it. more..