We'll make things alright

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We argue , We fight
But, Afterall We are sisters we make things alright
I was so small i didnt knew
She was my only frnd till i started school
We both got big and things change by our sides
Its just a mystery why things cant get alright
She got married, She had a new life
I was happy but with some tears in my eyes
I have said some things which was bad
but she forgot everything just like that
Now shes taking a flight.I miss those fights ..I am sure she miss it too.. Because Afterall we are sisters we'll make things alright

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for the relationships of the sisters.
"Now shes taking a flight.I miss those fights ..I am sure she miss it too.. Because Afterall we are sisters we'll make things alright "
We will miss the arguments and time spend together. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Parul Sharma]

Shared some real feelings all cause of my sister..thank you so much for ur kind words..glad u enjoyed ut!

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand the poem. I had six brothers.

[Parul Sharma]

Separation is really difficult to accept .

[Eliot Knight]

This is the second piece of yours I'm reading and I have to say, with proper effort and training you will be able to right beautifully, your poems have heart and the ability to press nostalgia. Keep at it and good luck!

[Mitali Shah]

I don't have any siblings but can surely connect to this

[GreenShoes]

Aww, I don't have a sister but I certainly can feel the pain and the joy in this poem.

[Parul Sharma]

Thank you so much :)

[StimulateyourCreativity]

awesome nice job! True relationship ups and downs with siblings

[Parul Sharma]

Thanks a ton! Glad u liked it :)

[Basit Majeed]

Truly loving and caring
...

[Parul Sharma]

Thank you :)

[Tauvic Heedajat]

Lovely poem!!! I also have a sister. We often argued when we were young. She was a "ferocious" sister but I know that she also doted on me. I still remembered when I got a motor crash, she was the one helping me to recompense for the damage. I also remembered when my brother was jailed because of having marijuana, she was the one washing his clothes at home while crying. I knew how she loves us, her brothers. There is a bond of big affection behind her ferocity.
Thank you for sharing a lovely poem.

[Parul Sharma]

Ohh..Its life we have ups and downs we always remember the people who wer there in.our bad times specially our family members..glad you could relate this poem...thanks alot for reviewing it !

[Arjun Singh]

Well i dont hv many sisters... so i try to envision my brother...
Little difficult, bt i get d feeling of separation...enjoyd.. :)

[Parul Sharma]

Yes this feeling is real and hard to accept ..Thank you :)

[Writergirl]

Sisters are the best :) Lovely poem

[Parul Sharma]

Yes they are..Thank you :)

[Sari Segale]

Sisters,sweet poem about relationship,family,thank you for sharing.

[Parul Sharma]

Thank you for ur kind words.. :)