We'll make things alright

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We argue , We fight
But, Afterall We are sisters we make things alright
I was so small i didnt knew
She was my only frnd till i started school
We both got big and things change by our sides
Its just a mystery why things cant get alright
She got married, She had a new life
I was happy but with some tears in my eyes
I have said some things which was bad
but she forgot everything just like that
Now shes taking a flight.I miss those fights ..I am sure she miss it too.. Because Afterall we are sisters we'll make things alright

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for the relationships of the sisters.
"Now shes taking a flight.I miss those fights ..I am sure she miss it too.. Because Afterall we are sisters we'll make things alright "
We will miss the arguments and time spend together. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Parul Sharma]

Shared some real feelings all cause of my sister..thank you so much for ur kind words..glad u enjoyed ut!

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand the poem. I had six brothers.

[Parul Sharma]

Separation is really difficult to accept .

[Joseph Tafoya]

i like it alot from the start to the end,you put somthing most sisters growing up in a short and happy poem here, you are very talented.

[Parul Sharma]

Just gave it a try ..Thank you so much for reviewing and the encouragement ...Sisters are like this ..we make things alright no matter what. Thanks :)

[Joseph Tafoya]

Haha yea and I'll try but still it's a good story

[Emily]

'I was happy but with some tears in my eyes'
Love this line!
Well done!

[Parul Sharma]

Thank you Emily!! ..All because of my sister :)

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

I love the ending....you are sisters and in the end you will make things right....nice poetry and thank you for sharing your talent.

[Parul Sharma]

Thank you so much Jane ..I am glad you enjoyed it..I have just started writing and this encouragement helps me a lot :)

[Indra Neil]

thoughts, feelings and emotions of a sister are well very conveyed in this fine write! well done! :)

[Parul Sharma]

Thank you so much...My feelinare real because of my sister ..Glad u liked it!

[Indra Neil]

u r most welcome! :)

[Michael Stevens]

A fine poem about the bond between sisters!

[Parul Sharma]

Thank you so much :)

[Michael Stevens]

You're quite welcome!

[Sultrysoul]

Very sweet... a relationship between sisters

[Parul Sharma]

Thanks :) this relation is something special !

[Sultrysoul]

Yes it is. Thank you for sharing

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

I Loved it!
Its penned with so pure and loving emotions that it touches the right chord.
Very relatable.. Since I myself have a darling sister..! :)

[Parul Sharma]

Glad you loved it! Thank you so very much dear . As I am new here thanks for the encouragement...We fight with people we love..And that is great haha

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siblings tend to fight sometimes - some more than others - but in most cases the love between them continues to shine through...it's all a part of being family...

[Parul Sharma]

Exactly... thats what i said things wil be alright ..

[....................]

yes, indeed

[Kajal Sharma]

great poetry :) well done...we fight with people we love but we can't live without them

[Parul Sharma]

I am glad you liked it..Thank you so much for reviewing

[Kajal Sharma]

pleasure is all mine...