Survival of the Meek

Numb, Fatigue... walking in my sleep

Tears, spent... too bad I haven’t slept

 

Fears, Desires.. Kept until we've wept

Lies, deceit... I am not a sheep

Reviews

[Angel Baby]

Wonderful write, found it interesting that so few words caught my attention and held on. Think it's perfect just the way is. PW

[~angelalala~]

there is so much strength & power in this poem. you've spoken volumes with very few words & that is a difficult thing to do. i love the layout of this poem, the flow, the repetition in each stanza. this is a wonderful write albeit a sad one.

[Rain]

Truly powerful in limited lines. I would love to see this piece extended, but I know that's not how it works.lol. Great write. Rain..

[A Simple man]

Amazing how just 4 sentences can be so full of emotion and power. Nice descriptions and word choice, although I do feel there may be a few spelling errors it is 4 am though so I am not sure to be honest. All in all I thought it was a good poem.

Thank you for the read!

-Simple Man