my star

Up above so high you twinkle and shine

I stare and feel small just biding my time

Crickets chirp not knowing your there

Entranced by your beauty I sit and stare

I want to come to you, get away from it all

As you sparkle for me my problems seem small

Daylight breaks through, and hides you from sight

You are gone until another cloudless night

Author's Note

I read a poem about stars... this is what it inspired from me!

Reviews

[JenLyn]

Beautiful, I love the imagery in this poem. I believe there is one typo though "Crickets chirp not knowing your there" your should be you're but everyone makes those mistakes but just thought I would let you know. It was a great write and a pleasure to read. Keep it up! :)

[Thomas W Case]

Great use of rhyme. Keep going.

[Sami Khalil]

A lovely write. Hopefully your star will keep shining...:).............

[PurpleQuartz]

Beautiful poem.

[Buddhistboy73]

Beautiful write....looking at the night sky makes me feel like I am at the same time so special, but so insignificant. kinda spiritual....
I liked the line "crickets chirp not knowing your there".....
and the idea that tomorrow is another night to behold....with a different perspective...:)

[Valentine]

A dark starfilled sky is so beautiful..There are areas where they seem so much closer to the earth..nice write,lola nd God bless..Kathie

[Mithridate]

beautiful poem...it reminds me of a night i had :) thank you for awakening a beautiful memory :) keep on writing!

[PhantomDancer]

Beautiful, so short but inpirational!

[Von Halford]

Awwwww :) This made me smile. Doesn't happen often these days.

[Dylan I. Cree]

This is beautiful. It's so sincere. I myself love the stars and the moon and the sun.