Just A Thought...

A bit of a love poem...

THERE IS NOTHING LEFT OF YOU TONIGHT
HOLLOW YET SO VERY ALIVE
MUCH LIKE THE LIGHT THAT SHINED IN YOUR EYES

I MISS THE WAY YOU SMILED AT ME
I CRY FOR DAYS LOST AS THEY PASS AWAY
SLOWLY AND WITHOUT CHANGE

LATE AT NIGHT TREMBLING I THINK OF YOUR FACE
VIBRANT YET SO DISTANT AND BEYOND MY REACH

I KNOW YOU ARE HERE EVEN THOUGH YOU ARE GONE
AND AS THESE EVENINGS FADE I FEEL BLESSED

SO HAPPY THAT I KNEW YOU
SO THANKFUL THAT I ONCE HELD YOUR HEART...

Reviews

[Sarah Buchanan]

Awwww this ones sweet, although I don't know who it's about. I'm sure you'll tell me later on. Very well written.

[Dana Shefelbine]

the modulation in this poem is phenomenal.
you're a dream.

[No Longer Writing Here]

I like how the poem starts off dark but then the last three lines bring back the light

"AND AS THESE EVENINGS FADE I FEEL BLESSED
SO HAPPY THAT I KNEW YOU
SO THANKFUL THAT I ONCE HELD YOUR HEART..."

Being thankful for having that person in your life is something that we all should reach for. Very nicely written

[Phantom Princess]

wow i got a lump in my throat reading this one. death is so hard for those left behind. you brought real emotion to this piece