Angel

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

Angel

You were an angel

once upon my living dream

who cast me to hell.

© 2012 John Alexander McFadyen

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Valentine

Wish it would have ended...who gave me heaven..Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Me too but life is not always like that. Thank you Valentine.

Gypsy Warrior Queen

I thought only Gods had that power ...who knew angels were that evil ;p!

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

An angel in human form I guess has an excuse to transgress. Thanks for reading Queenie

Lyn Anderson

Once again, I like the edgy one as opposed to the soft and warm and fuzzy one. Beautifully executed.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you kindly KLG

Junert

Wow

Posted 13 Years Ago

John Alexander McFadyen

Maybe its me who gets involved and does not quit even in the face of overwhelming evidence that things are not right. Even today I want to talk to her.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Lisa Ring

Not a nice thing to do. Why did you let her?

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

Just someone I trusted!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Yheela

Angel of Doom, disguised as the Angel of Love?

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on July 22, 2012
Last Updated on July 22, 2012

Author

John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..