Beginnings

Beginnings

From bud to blossom

beautiful bloom that grows strong

please last forever.

Reviews

[Renée]

Ah I picked a fine one to read indeed ! Pleasantly done !

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Glad you enjoyed

[SHEEMA HUQ]

rather like insising the spring season lasts all year round, now wouldn't that be heaven for a 2014?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Sheema

[Andorianskye]

lovely

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Xleana

[spiritwind]

mmmmmm..... wouldn't that be the loveliest flowering of them all
or would beauty weaken with time and boredom
and the yearning for the flowering of yon daffodil and yonder pansy

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think not SW if love be the cause and the roses are left to grow entwined.

[spiritwind]

then I wish you well and may this kind of love grow in your life and entwine those 2 roses

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank yo so much

[quinfinn]

you are quite good at these 5/7/5 formatted writes....this is beautiful

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Quin you are a star

[quinfinn]

as Carl Sagan would say...."billions and billions"

[Leslie Philibert]

You are working here with short poems, haiku style, fine write

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes they have a way of disciplining succinctness

[LA Lorena]

nice! simple eloquence. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you LL just like you then!

[DIVYA]

Every lover's wish!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Divya you got the meaning straight away. Thank you.

[X]

This is good John. I see why you included the last line, it;s simply stating your wishes for this new blooming, blossoming love. I like it

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Spot on X many thanks

[X]

No problem

[Aly]

I don't understand why it is entitled "Beginnings" when the last sentence completely confused me "please last forever" I guess I would have to be in your mind to understand.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Well maybe buds and blossoms do not last just like relationships.

[Aly]

? um...alright. Whatever floats your boat.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Really?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The poem is about the beginning of love.