I Fall

I Fall

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

I Fall

Like cherry petals

or the tears of warm rain drops

I fall forever.

© 2012 John Alexander McFadyen


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No the falling id cherry petals or rain!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Frieda P

13 Years Ago

welcome sweetie ;-)
John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

So no chage of daiper lol
Frieda P

13 Years Ago

haha I can just see you pouting from here! lol
It's charming John, I wanna fall too.

Would suggest 'on' for 'or' but that's just me ;-)

I still love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago
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Interesting and nonetheless poignant. This is a nice new genre you are breaking into John- keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

Thanks x

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 Added on July 23, 2012
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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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