Sun Worship

Sun Worship

My body painted

with golden strokes of warm sun

I wear a bronze badge.

26/07/12

 

Reviews

[Andorianskye]

wonderful

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Xleana. Bring back the sun!

[spiritwind]

I thought haiku till I counted a 6 instead of a 7...of course, there are probably more haiku schemes than I can dream of, Horatio.
How lush the body sounds with a sun tan... when I was a teenager, my body was a terrific shade of brown... but I hated the fish-belly white of winter
whoops, sorry , straying away from topic
sun worshipping is a very dangerous religion--often requires self-sacrifice

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oops you are right even when using 'on'. I hate not getting the sun in winter hence I was still sunbathing up till October lol!

[spiritwind]

ah, yes, the beauty of bronzed goose flesh
;)

[Frieda P]

Ahh a bronzed being with omnipotent powers of writing skills. Nice.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha, ha! I just love the sun and no white bits.

[quinfinn]

nicely done, later in years you may find melanomas on your skin.....i did! sun worship can lead to health issues...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So does drinking, shagging, getting out of bed. We weigh the issues and sun simply is my medicine for all ails

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks quin

[quinfinn]

so true...

[Leslie Philibert]

Visual - well written.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thans Leslie

[LA Lorena]

I'm gonna wear one next month in Mexico! I love the warmth of the sun too.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Lucky you and no white bits I hope. Me I'm off to Norway in February, chilly round the willy lol

[DIVYA]

Nice tan!
Though in this part of the world we avoid the sun to stay as fair as we can! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am a sun worshiper. Even in moments I'd deep despair I have laid beneath the gentling of the sun's strokes. I am happiest when bronzed. Hate winter lol. Thank you Divya!

[DIVYA]

:)

[DIVYA]

winters restricts...summer sets free!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

true my lady, true

[Aly]

The sun shining off a man?
I'm sorry for saying this but for a split second I thought of a sparkling Vampire.
Good job writing.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

What about a bronzed god?

[Aly]

Oh. Oh that makes sense...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Good!