Sun

Sun

The sun upon your skin
is a stoker of the fire
to paint you bronze
and warm your need
and burst you
with desire.

                              5/8/12

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

a dreamy propostion

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed Sheema; thank you for taking the time to review so many pieces.

[Leigh]

I love that feeling and you have described it perfectly

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Always glad to meet another sun worshiper.

[spiritwind]

pleasantly warms the senses
makes me smile
and feel like curling up in the sun
or in this season before a crackling fire

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No crackling fire can replace the sun's strokes for me. Just love it on my skin.

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I love this poem. The feeling is so balmy and inviting. Great job,John, and happy new year.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Cord

[ms. barrie]

your words in this poem are a sensuous fiery delight to read. gorgeous! 100 to 100 :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Barrie. Wishing for sun right now as it is cold here!

[ms. barrie]

you welcome, i'm in Central FL, and i'm freezing here, cannot imagine how cold it must be over there, though i always dream't of visiting the U.K. -- one day perhaps :)

[Frieda P]

Great read on this chilly morning.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Frieda!

[Claire Twinn]

Makes me long for summer days...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Me too!
Thanks Claire

[quinfinn]

this is creative and speaks volumes with few lines, excellent!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Quin. My favourite thing and the best antidepressant I know!

[Andorianskye]

very nice

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks

[Leslie Philibert]

A short poem with an effective, compact message, good write.