Sun

Sun

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

Sun

The sun upon your skin
is a stoker of the fire
to paint you bronze
and warm your need
and burst you
with desire.

                              5/8/12

© 2013 John Alexander McFadyen


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a dreamy propostion

Posted 12 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

12 Years Ago

Indeed Sheema; thank you for taking the time to review so many pieces.
I love that feeling and you have described it perfectly

Posted 12 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

12 Years Ago

Always glad to meet another sun worshiper.
pleasantly warms the senses
makes me smile
and feel like curling up in the sun
or in this season before a crackling fire

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

No crackling fire can replace the sun's strokes for me. Just love it on my skin.
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I love this poem. The feeling is so balmy and inviting. Great job,John, and happy new year.

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

Thanks Cord
your words in this poem are a sensuous fiery delight to read. gorgeous! 100 to 100 :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

Thank you Barrie. Wishing for sun right now as it is cold here!
ms. barrie

13 Years Ago

you welcome, i'm in Central FL, and i'm freezing here, cannot imagine how cold it must be over there.. read more
Great read on this chilly morning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

Thanks Frieda!
Makes me long for summer days...

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

Me too!
Thanks Claire
this is creative and speaks volumes with few lines, excellent!

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

Thank you Quin. My favourite thing and the best antidepressant I know!
very nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

Many thanks
A short poem with an effective, compact message, good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..