Sun

Sun

The sun upon your skin
is a stoker of the fire
to paint you bronze
and warm your need
and burst you
with desire.

                              5/8/12

Reviews

[DIVYA]

stoking is usually associated with fire so the imagery is great to convey desire. Nice effect created there. I see the sun has many uses :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Just noticed I had not altered the repeated word 'desire' sorted now! Yes the sun on my skin is a real turn on for me.

[DIVYA]

How do you manage in winters? Just joking. You do not have to answer that one. ;)

[That_Girl]

It's great... but I desire more. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I find the sun on my body is the seed that bursts........

[X]

"A stoker of desire", John, I'm sure you and I could both apply that phrase to something else we seem to enjoy writing about! Haha, well done man.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha X I think you may be right! many thanks.

[X]

Haha no problem

[Junert]

Rather too short.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Me too. I hope you feel it?

[Yheela]

This I like, hot even!