No More

No More

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

No More

I have your name,

I am to you JJ.

I have your place here

soft on my chest.

I grew my hair at your request.

The name, the place and look you created.

You gave them to me : a gift.

More precious than gold,

More durable than diamond,

but you could give no more than that.

 

 

30/10/11

 

© 2012 John Alexander McFadyen


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Beautiful, so emotive

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

Thank you Jo.
See, we women do that; we play games just as much as men do!
We grab a guy, then spend all our time trying to change him; and then complain that he "isn't the guy we married/first met..."
We are all stupid when it comes to love!!!
I don't thing we (men or women) should play with love (or be allowed to love) until we can handle it correctly!!!
But what do I know, I am just bitter and hate love!

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

Nice rant Nicki. Really enjoyed the Meetup last week such fun as always. Nice to see new faces too.
Nicky Sarti

13 Years Ago

Yeah it was ~ sorry bout the rant, I am better now!
(ish. kinda)
I read this twice and could not help but think that perhaps this is a letter to ones father.......love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

13 Years Ago

I guess that is one interpretation. But it is to an ex lover who wanted to change me to fit her conc.. read more

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Added on October 20, 2012
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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..