Dear Poetess

Dear Poetess

I would spill your blood

upon these pages

for the slights you

have portrayed.

But of my wrath

you are not worthy

even though

you have betrayed

my love.

 

23/03/13

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Strong and solid declaration of a brilliant poet. each words progress into a mature judgement in dealings life,love and trust. Great work John!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you marc I am glad you like it.

[Frieda P]

The wrath of John the Poet...Holy, a fate worse than death! Couldn't think of anything worse, unless it's having your eyeballs plucked out from your head! ;-) Nice one

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha! hell hath no fury and no not your eyes as I would wish you to watch your torturer at work.......

[Frieda P]

Wow, a bit sadistic this morning, are we? lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh yes! We can do pain!

[Frieda P]

Who knew, and all this time I thought you sweet lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Pleasure and pain can, in the right doses, be a complete turn on and I have an inkling you may know this from your erotic pieces my lady!

[Frieda P]

Only if I'm the one inflicting it! Lol

[DaniElle LaPointe]

This makes me wonder how one would portray a slight... Too short for me to reflect and decide. :D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

In deflamitary words dear poetess