Faithless

Faithless

I dare not contemplate

this dream

for it has taken too many

changes of the moon

to reach my world.

Too many cycles of the sun

have passed and scorched my flesh

till my bones are arid dry.

For too long I have lived

in this abyss of sadness,

that deep and empty place

where hope has no light

and the energy of love

dare not evoke the demons

that guard hate so well.

 

07/04/13

Reviews

[Silas]

Beautiful. That touched me, it really did. That was very well written. I think I will read more.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Silas

[Lina Grey]

heavy... had to read it through a couple times. great job :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Lina, thanks for reading.

[Lina Grey]

:)

[Nami Machae]

pretty good :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks

[Libby Carsons]

great use of comparisons, loved the read!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks

[A. H. Pinley]

Deep is the pit.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed it is AHP many thanks

[Baby Ricochet]

heavy man

[Silhouette]

Too many cycles of the sun
have passed and scorched my flesh
til my bones are arid dry.
For too long I have lived
in the abyss of sadness,
that deep and empty place
where hope has no light

Very nicely written, and these lines were my favorite. Well done =)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks

[Silhouette]

You are welcome

[s y e]

No matter how bad life is or how broken you are you will always find light somewhere.
Nice piece John!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi NH thanks. Glad it's simply poetry.

[gombeggar]

pain and id perhaps

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok thanks

[Mike Emil]

this is where brandy and saki come in to play!!! HAI!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sounds good to me! Thanks.