Hard Hitter

Hard Hitter

You don’t pull punches,

you certainly don’t play fair.

Hope you are happy

that the pain you caused us all

has destroyed our faith in you.

 

26/05/13

Reviews

[Leigh]

I wonder what this is about? Hmmm people who use their excessive power unnecessarily? Bullies? Or billy goats? Butt you make a good point here, really ram it home... :-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Never saw this comment. Time moves us ever onward! It is about a woman/step mother who let us down (again).

[KAOlmsted]

*yawn* Wake me when it's over ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Lightweight!

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! ;-)

[Emerald Seas]

A powerful voice, well executed.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you QSS

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfection - a real truth!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Thomas

[Kristin Lee]

Disappointment...that is the one emotion that I never want to see on the face of anyone I love. You've done an excellent job of conveying it here.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks Kirstin

[s y e]

Wow, I dont wanna get on your bad side! Ha! Nice one, John! Makes a punch.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Sye, hope you are good.

[Clockwork]

An incredibly exacting and blunt piece. The speaker lays it all on the line and delivers the message that needs to be gotten across in the moment. While we read the climactic moment when the speaker divulges his feelings, we can imagine that there were many events that built up to that moment. I like that we as readers have the creative invitation to enter into the work and ponder the situation. Glad I came across this write.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks for reading Clockwork

[PP]

Faith is crucial indeed..don't play it fair - Loss is only the loser's! Thanks for this powerful poetry John :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Prathama

[Nick.B]

Tough and very raw, well written

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Nick.