Hard Hitter

Hard Hitter

You don’t pull punches,

you certainly don’t play fair.

Hope you are happy

that the pain you caused us all

has destroyed our faith in you.

 

26/05/13

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Cut to the bone, sliced, diced and fed to whoever is deserving of this biting poetry, well done John!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha and as if we don't know

[Frieda P]

Hey, I'm trying to stay out of trouble....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Dear Frieda you stay out of trouble....nice.....off to bed.

[Frieda P]

Ha me or you? ;-)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Wow.. I don't want to make you mad.. Your pen is a sword.. lol. Lots of anger and pain in such a short verse.. love it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Lori!

[Leslie Philibert]

Hope this is not infighting...as a poem well written.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Simply an emotional poem about truth
Leslie. Many thanks

[Jack...]

So much truth in 5 short lines John. Bravo.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Jack.