Returning the Rainbow

Returning the Rainbow

I am so sad to have draped your heart with tears

and to have caused your gentle soul such pain.

If I deprived you of love then I am a fool,

no greater fool would see you wilt,

gasping for air and drained of the hues your beauty

radiates across this Earth.

And that you held fast your faith in love

is little short of wonder and tells me

the true depth of your adoration.

It cries to me from your very core

that I am at last in the light of the woman

for whom I have yearned.

So I will return the colour of the rainbow to your skies

with passion and devotion beyond compare

and I will pledge myself to thee

more certain than the setting of the sun and the rising of the moon,

clearing the crystal waters of your tears.

 

7^th July 2014

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

A tender loving romantic write, the one to make women swoon. I can't help it if I prefer lemons to rainbows, but this is a sweet poem nonetheless.:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha 'M' just me expressing feelings again. Many thank yous!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Awww this is a sweet love poem, I love how it flows. My favorite part is "and I would pledge myself to thee, more certain than the setting of the sun and the rising of the moon, clearing the crystal waters of your tears." But all of it is wonderful.

Great Job

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you PK. Sorry I have taken so ;long to reply but been on holiday (vacation)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome xD I forgot about this, so it's nice to see it again lol hope you had a good vacation

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you again PK. I am just going to get back into WC after a break so will come peak at your work soon, My vacation was great. Two weeks in Lanzerote in the sun!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome again lol and I would appreciate that, glad to hear you had a great vacation