Will You?

Will You?

Our love is a safe place

for you and I to shelter,

for it is a fortress

built of moonbeams and star dust

and duets spilt from the lips of angels.

It is the soft landing

both of us have craved

after the fall upon the jagged edge

we both bore.

So will you not reach out,

place your sweet head

upon this pillow,

and welcome

such an honest

offering of my soul.

A soul pledged to you

and your happiness

which I treasure and desire?

 

06/08/14

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am swooning here, by the light of your moonbeams! Your poetry is the star dust in my eyes, John! Wonderful, simply wonderful...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you, thank you, thank you Kellly for such a lovely review.

[Mary Bosworth]

Such embraces of the spirit and the soul are always eternal. Fascinated by your writing

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Mary.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so romantic and beautifully penned John.Love should be a harbor to keep us safe from a tumultuous world.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

When we find it it is. Just some people like to set to sea too often!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha that is funny and true.People keep looking for love and don't even recognize it when they find it.I think maybe they like the searching.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Or think there will be somthing better in the next safe port?

[Vidya Bacchus]

That is so ridiculous to me.You already have something great but your'e still looking for something better.People are so stupid sometimes lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes they are and I have been exposed to it on many occassions. It is the throw away society we live in where instant gratification is required and everything lasts only till the next upgrade.

[Vidya Bacchus]

That is so true .People no longer value anything and the first argument sees them fleeing for the door hence the reason for so many divorces I think.People get married today and by next week are filing for divorce .It boggles my mind.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Mine too. Hopefully the circle will turn again.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes hopefully :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Swaying words of romance and love.....yes, a true romance is a soft spot to land and while there is passion, there is also peace and understanding. so lovely. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Lydi.

[Frieda P]

Now this is more like it like it John, your sweet passion has gone to my head and left me wanting for more...a sigh moment, swooning to the poetic prowess in your ardor.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha you tease my Lady but thank you anyway!

[Frieda P]

I was actually being sincere John, man, you just don't get when I'm sarcastic...

[Lily Mae]

And she would half to be blind, deaf and ignorant not to want to rest her head on your pillow..and gaze into the night sky. Beautiful poetry and I just love the way you love...xo

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Lily you are most kind. Thank you!

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, moonbeams and stardust, the incurable romantic. All the ladies in the cafe' are swooning once again ... :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sceptic! But thank you....

[Lyn Anderson]

Who, moi? Skeptical? Not of your sincerity, that I believe wholeheartedly. It is my own jadedness that shows through ...