If You Dare

If You Dare

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

If You Dare

If you dare dream

then you may dance

to ethereal tunes

under moonlit stars.

If you dare believe

then you are free,

liberated to think,

to breathe, to live.

If you dare trust

then the warmth

of affection and devotion

will be yours to choose.

And if you give

of yourself completely,

place yourself in my care,

you will find your true and enduring love.

 

23/08/14

© 2014 John Alexander McFadyen


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John Alexander McFadyen

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"If you dare trust
then the warmth
of affection and devotion
will be yours to choose."

I appreciate the your usage of the word "dare". It is very difficult and very scary to. That's why so many people build a wall around themselves and prefer to live in solitary confinement rather than dare trust.

A beautiful poem on the art of living a truly beautiful life...Please accept my compliments.


Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank with warmth Divya.
i try to do all of these...but one that i do pretty well is dance...

i may be a skeptical person in ways...but have the music in me.

nicley penned...
jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Wish I could dance Jacob and am determined to learn to waltz so I may do so at my daughter's wedding.. read more
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Dee
Bravo John. Wonderful choice words, and beautiful imagery.
And if you give
of yourself completely,
place yourself in my care,
you will find your true love........I so love these lines...

Being a hopeless romantic, this beautiful poem was a perfect read for me...Smiles...Dee

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you Dee. Romance is so underrated.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..