Seeing Karina

Seeing Karina

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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Love.

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Seeing Karina

I remember the warmth

and the depth of your eyes.

The way they sparkled

when you laughed,

the way they shone

rays of love upon me,

your ‘miracle’.

I still see your mane

of jet-black hair

flowing sensually, framing

the beauty of your sweet

adorable face, I see

your hair spread across

pillows we have shared

in tender loving moments,

when our desires melted

and collided like exploding

stars.

I see a voluptuous mouth; the

only lips I have ever

really desired,

whose kisses felt heaven

sent. I treasure every glance,

every word, every breath we shared

and every touch we have ever

had.

05/10/14

© 2014 John Alexander McFadyen


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John Alexander McFadyen

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romantic and intense but never garish.
wonderfully depicted.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Many Thank yous.
Right now I can see Karina. What a velvety soft portrait you painted with your words. The romantic longing is palpable, John. Wonderful work. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi, I am still mourning and in shock.
This is soft, and gentle, and filled with longing. A wonderful romantic write -- the emotion is very real.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Ha you indulge moi aujourd'hui madam. Many thanks.
A very tender love poem. If I opened my mail tomorrow and there was such a poem inside, my day would start in the most perfect way.

Beccy.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you Beccy I just feel full of tears!

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Added on October 5, 2014
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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..