Our Direction

Our Direction

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

What love is.

"

Our Direction

Come drink me dry

of all I am willing to give.

Come slake me with

your honour and devotion

until I am so fulfilled

I cannot partake

your flesh until

the next time.

And my only reticence

is earth bound,

that my physical form

must retrench,

rearm,

and then again dedicate its

weapons of war

to you and you alone.

And when it does

we are both

atomic in our

sweet desire

to satisfy

and love.

 

11/12/14

© 2014 John Alexander McFadyen


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hahaha AHHHH! I LOVE THIS ! So Good John!!!!! :)))))

And when it does

we are both

atomic in our

sweet desire

to satisfy

and love.

My favorite lines :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Suk.
The Black Warrior

11 Years Ago

It is my pleasure :D
Ah that the only thing that holds us back is our physical ability, and not our minds.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thanks 'M'; I know YOU get it.
Wow this is something .....


Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you for such kindness Layi.
Sigh...it is the sheer ease of passion within your writing that pulls the reader in...epic xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

I am made of passion Poppy but have failed to find one who wants to share.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..