The Brutality of Deceit

The Brutality of Deceit

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

What is love?

"

The Brutality of Deceit

My hands are caked

in the dried blood

of lost love.

So many brutal endings

that make the Balkans

look like a picnic.

Yet I slit no throats,

stood no innocents

against the cow shed

and punctured their

flesh with lead

from an AK47.

So why am I to pay

for the sins of this war?

 

18/12/14

© 2014 John Alexander McFadyen


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Brutal and angry. Effective in its harshness.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

And I feel every word. Thank you 'M'
Love hurts like nothing else can.
Especially when you've been deceived, I know this feeling and it ripped my guts out when it happened.

Another great song choice. The tears I have cried listening to that song over and over and over and over...

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Me and you both Ana although 'Jar of Hearts' took this songs place in my beautiful, though sad, cabi.. read more
Matching Socks

11 Years Ago

Another very good song. I've cried to so many songs I've lost count.
Some songs, like some po.. read more
we seem to always be paying for those love wars...we have broken hearts, broken limbs of emotion, we are also often paralyzed in the heart----and our minds and attitude toward love just gets so jaded...

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Ha Jacob you have just spoken the outline of the poem I was penning called Mysophobia! Thank you for.. read more

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..