Gius abit!

Gius abit!

My blood runs cold

as I realise you stood me up!

Have I been mugged again?

Left in the lurch

by yet another?

Then you appear,

panting apologies

for lateness.

You are so beautiful

you take my breath away,

without hesitation we kiss.

Our first meeting

and my blood runs hot.

 

24/12/14

Author's Note

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

All is forgiven in that kiss.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

If only lol! Many thanks.

[Matching Socks]

Yay!!!!!!!!!!

That's how I felt when you got the girl, like cheering!
I'm a big fan of happy endings. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Happy Christmas Ana and thank you. Unfortunately this was me looking forward to a date after Christmas lol!

[ANTO]

Classic - Gius Abit - brilliant
The twist is great and you nailed it - cold to hot in an instant when she turns up.
Well done mate!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You got the Glasweigan in the title then?

[ANTO]

Yes mate, John, Belfast and Glaswegian (even Edinburgh) is so close - I met a couple in Tenerife years and we hit it off immeadiately - no problems with the lingo and then theres TV's Rab C, Limmy et al where I picked some up.

See if you get this Belfast vernacular
See yer man. Hes swallying all day

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Your partner is drinking all day! The title 'Gius Abit' means in latin 'blood runs'

[ANTO]

Wow ! thats interesting and very clever. Kudos

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Na just circumstantial evidence!

[ANTO]

lol - canny

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Seek and ye shall find lol!