Days of Summer

Longing....

Days of Summer

 

It was the long languid days of summer

that tinted her hair,

where the balm of evening

exacerbated

her need for love.

 

28/03/15

Reviews

[~]

And everything comes back to full course.. loved the longing for love.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah the effect of the sun and shedding the clothes of winter. Amour becomes much more accessible and visible as people mix more. This was inspired by Kelly's 'Days of Winter' which reminded me how I hated this winter past but was now feeling so optimistic for the spring and summer to come.

[~]

Yes, I did realize after reading hers. Both poems compliment each other perfectly. Two peas in a pod. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you MS

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am flattered by the yielding of your response to my "Days of Winter", John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Now and again a writer stimulates your passion for writing. Your recent works are inspirational and have given me much food for thought. I have enjoyed imbibing them and in doing so they have set me off on trains of thinking that lead to words on a page. Thank you Kelly!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can picture her...i really can...and i want to tell her that he will come.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think he just might Jacob. Many thanks for such a sensitive review.

[ANTO]

I loved the reference to the Sun lightening her hair John - to me, remarking on such details show how deep you are, for such things are only spoken of by women or noticed by men who take their time to truly study women in admiration.
I feel the passion and reverence for lovers in this write John.
Write on my friend!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Anto you are such a fillip to all on here with your kindness and words of encouragement. Many thanks.

[Lydia Shutter]

The alliteration in this poem drew me in. Seductive and enticing scene painted beautifully. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Lydi as I anticipate summer.

[Lydia Shutter]

It will be here soon....in South Florida it almost felt like it had arrived yesterday. It was in the nineties!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Maybe should move to Florida instead of Malta!? it is the hurricanes that put me off lol!

[Lydia Shutter]

We have not had one effect us since Wilma....and that was in 2005!