Sun Bathing

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

My joy!

Sun Bathing

Swallows high above

sailing on the misty blue,

sunshine on my skin.

03/04/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen

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andrew mitchell

A great short write John, very concise and tight and its high twenties here even thirty on easter mondee lol

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Lucky you Andrew send some of it over here please. Many thanks.

ANTO

John dont take this wrong but your poem with its brevity was an appetiser to that video and its images and song. The whole was like a delightful breakfast on the veranda of a Spanish Villa first thing in the morning.
Great ensemble and a super tonic. Thank for posting this one.
Class John.
:))

Posted 10 Years Ago

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10 Years Ago

You are so very kind Anto. Many thank yous again!

10 Years Ago

You're welcome mate.
I dont think we'll be seeing much sun this Easter weekend here, how's it.. read more

10 Years Ago

Nah think you are right but we are due some soon lol!

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Added on April 3, 2015
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John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom

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