Gazing

Some things are simply right.

Gazing

I yearn for your kiss

for in your eyes I saw stars

and the moon as one.

 

03/04/15

Reviews

[ANTO]

I really like this. Seeing this in the eyes of a lover - they are your moon and stars - they are your everything.
So much in such a short poem JG.
A little book of these - not unlike the ones from years ago - remember the tiny books called 'The little Book of (Happiness, Calm, etc, etc) - would be a wonderful lovers gift and set the mood so well on a date. Class
:))

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Anto you are a mate! Me thinks there are a million such books like that and my offerings are probably not that publishable.

[ANTO]

Well I have space in my pocket for just such another such little book - why shouldnt it be 'The Little book of modern love by John Gabriel'
:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Gabriel is not a good Scottish name. I stole it from my alter ego Archangel Gabriel. A page I set up when last year friends were attacked. http://www.writerscafe.org/strengthofGod

[ANTO]

Well - better not reveal anything for obvious reasons but - good to know Mr Mactavish
;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey my son, an outstanding writer is on the site under his own name and my daughter who knocks out a decent poem is on as well but under a pseudonym.

[ANTO]

Tell me all about them in a PM - I'd like to read them - I'll eat the message after reading ;p

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Just look at my friends. I am very selective about friends so have few. My daughter is 'Fergie'

[ANTO]

I will do that John - thanks.