Love of my Life

When only she will do!

Love of my Life

Is it wrong to yearn,

given that I gave my love

to you forever?

03/04/15

Reviews

[ANTO]

Senryu superman !!
Im gonna revise the title of that book deal to 'The Little book of Love Senryus by John Gabriel'

Its not wrong to still yearn - nor is it within our control whom we yearn after. After all - they - have - our - hearts.
:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No just so in love! Thanks Anto.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are having a wicked time with this form...within the restraints of syllables and lines, you are unrestrained and free.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think I have you to thank Jacob. I have used the form many times but your recent spell and an incident that reminded me of my love set it off.

[Lydia Shutter]

So much emotion packed into this short poem, John. The marriage vows are null and void when there is a divorce, but the heart still remembers....and always will. Good one. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Lydi. I never got the chance to marry this one!