Soulless

Empty.

Soulless

You were my reason;

everything I believed in

and now I am lost.

 

04/04/15

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Short but heavy is the tone and the emotions. another gem John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Cheers Andrew.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...a true connotation of feeling alone.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Kelly. Just an expression of how I feel lol!

[...]

The brevity of pain displayed in such deep emotion surely is not empty

[John Alexander McFadyen]

But the pain has endured. Thank you Lynn.

[...]

leaving it is so final. Your not ready to do that yet

[MsJewel]

So much emotion and pain in so few words. Brilliant writing.

Julie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Julie.

[Matching Socks]

There's a hole left that it seems will never be filled again but in time it will either close or be filled with something new.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

One hopes this is true. Many thanks

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome John.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Could not be said...better than that in a Haiku...and the intended meaning in which this takes each reader...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Glen

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[ANTO]

They take so much with them John. We give it to them for safekeeping - whether they leave of their own volition or are taken - its always with chunks of us.
Very well conveyed in succinct conciseness.
anto
:))

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Cheers Anto!

[ANTO]

You welcome John - those who passed on we gladly leave a piece of ourselves with but those who take trophys like man-eaters deserve no mercy.

[Leslie Philibert]

This impresses with a haiku sparsity of thought, clear, sad, resigned. Good work !

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Leslie.