Our First Kisses

So deep!

Our First Kisses

I will never forget our first kiss,

the deep longing in our mouths

to give, that never abated.

That burned in charcoal embers

when we were apart

only to ignite into volcanic flame

whenever we came together.

 

14/04/15

Reviews

[ANTO]

Nothing like that first saliva-share John.
But joking aside, you nailed the whole feeling of it - the insatiability of it and the long-burning memory or it and the quick to light nature afterwards. I really liked this perfect poem.
:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Anto

[andrew mitchell]

Funny how everyone remembers that first kiss that not only satisfied the hormones but kicked them into gear! Great work John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Andrew

[....................]

The fuel and the flame - unabated combustion. A wonderful image here of that first kiss, and the subsequent ones.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks FTL