Calculus

Not maths!

Calculus

In this quadratic equation

love cannot be true

for what I offered you

was foursquare

and yet you denied

the veracity of my heart.

 

15/04/15

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I hated Math, especially when they started putting letters in the equations! This is sublime...I'm melting here!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I was more into English and art myself Kelly. Many thanks. Don't melt away completely pleeeeese!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I loved English! I was the only one who didn't hate having to write essays. I learned how to sew, to type, to cook, and I even took a home decorating course. I was a girl with a plan! ; )

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A homemaker! I spent a lot of time helping my disabled mother so became quite domesticated too lol.

[Kelly Scheppers]

My mom was diabled too, she lost both her legs a year apart, then suffered a stroke. I did everything for her, and never once regretted it! Bless you for taking care of your mom! x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You had more to endure than I. My mum had polio and lost the use of one leg but with four then six kids she had a lot on her plate.

[Leslie Philibert]

I know John`s work well, this is very good, for me echoes of Elisabethan love poetry, with its elaborate and original imagery. Excellent, read this WC !

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are far too kind dear Leslie. Many thanks.

[andrew mitchell]

John a clever clever write with the twist. I liked calculus at school and have never used this maths when I left for decades now lol. A great piece with precision and accuracy. wow!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks Andrew for such a positive review.

[ANTO]

"I love the 'Not maths!' tag line John. Its like showing someone a big dog then shouting after them as they run into the sunset 'Come back... he won't bite!'
Its a clever write my friend, cool metaphor and more to it than meets the eye. One of your best, I feel.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Anto for such a good review