Life

What it says on the tin.

Life

Amber soaked

my thoughts become

discordant.

The sun's rays accelerate

the butterscotch on both

my lips and my sky

and I am immaculate,

insatiate,

and yet fulfilled.

In this state I banish

all hate from my broken will

as I float in the sweet dimension

of possibilities as yet

unexplored.

 

16/04/15

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love when you write these introspective pieces, John. I get so absorbed into them...so lost in thought!

Kelly
x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you sweet Kelly! When I am in the sun in my garden I just float in space.

[andrew mitchell]

I like very much the last three line " as I float in the sweet dimension
of possibilities as yet
unexplored"

Just poetry in motion big time! Great poem John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Cheers Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

Kelly is so spot on with her comments. What you bring to the table is to admire, enjoy and sometimes just stop in awe!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you for your kindness Andrew. I get such pleasure from reading the works of others.

[andrew mitchell]

You are most welcome! In aussie we say " NO wucking furries mate!"

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Made me LMSO again!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like "the butterscotch on both/ my lips and my sky"---
tasty offering here with many possibilities...time to try all the candies of life.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thank yous Jacob.