Love's Junction

Souls collide

Love's Junction

I feel the tangent

of your curve upon my heart

where we truly meet.

 

19/04/15

Reviews

[EileenMarie]

Great Haiku! Nice flow. How love should be!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks Eileen

[Tom McRoberts]

I really like this one. It evokes a simple image, but also one that speaks for itself. There's no excess and no need for elaboration. Keep it up!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Tom. I do like to do the odd senyru.

[Tom McRoberts]

Interesting, I wasn't familiar with the form. I'd better catch up on my reading!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Just Google it. it's a Japanese form of poetry with a 5-7-5 syllable count.

[ANTO]

Wonderful wordplay John; succint yet universal message. You are a true gentleman of the old school charm and romance. I really liked this.
:))

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are too kind sir but I bow to your generosity.

[ANTO]

Tis deserve-d fine fellow.