Passion

Beautiful but dangerous!

Passion

Passion is a beauty and a curse!

for it takes your conscious rationale

and turns it into a boiling volcanic magma

that may simply and quietly ooze

in warm melted rock sheets

across the earth,

or shatter humanity as it explodes

in plumes of toxic gas

and hot burning ash,

that tears the world asunder.

 

27/04/15

Reviews

[alf]

Hi John. Passion, in whatever form it may be presented, can show the whole gamut of emotion. We can talk anger or sexuality, both ooze and explode. Great depiction here. Love the directness of each statement, factual and blunt, not hidden behind over-embellishment. Great write, alf

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Passion is my affliction Alf, in all its forms. Many thanks.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I think the boiling magma of a volcano is the perfect comparable to the passion you infuse in your sensual pieces, John!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Kelly!

[ANTO]

This is an inspiring metaphorical piece. Lots of energetic, powerful imagery in keeping with the nature of passion itself.
Impressive writing John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Cheers Anto!

[....................]

We all lose control when it comes to passion... I love your poetic take on it, John. It really does become 'boiling volcanic magma'.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you FT

[MsJewel]

So much truth in this wise little gem!

:) Julie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Julie. I think I am that volcano lol!

[Lydia Shutter]

Passion can be dangerous, no doubt about it. Very dramatic imagery here. Good one, John. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Lydi!