Pieces of Love

What it says.

Pieces of Love

 

Love's Pledge

Fair maid

for thee

I would indeed

provide.

 

02/05/15

 

My Offer

You brought me bread

and I would give you

the finest wines

and the freshest fruits.

I would lavish you

with the gift of love

and tend your needs

with warm and adoring lips.

 

02/05/15

 

Let Me

Let me fill the gaps

in your soul,

repair the wounds

in your heart

and tend the bruises

behind once bright,

now shattered eyes.

 

02/05/15

 

 

Love's Flow

Sweet dews

of love

we would mix;

elixir

for our souls.

 

02/05/15

 

Unfilled

My heart is but

an empty vessel

ready for you

to fill its

barren chambers

with your love.

 

02/05/15

 

Love's Cure

Your sweetness,

your drizzled honey,

is a poultice

upon the bitter

infected wounds

that I have endured.

 

02/05/15

 

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Very open and vulnerable odes to love and tribute to the beloved muse, so open like renaissance paintings depicting open nakedness, but just in a different kind of nakedness.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Nadia.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as Nisreenaa expressed...a perfect collection to profess a love so true and tender...to one who could salve the infected wounds of the past.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Jacob.

[B]

I love the collection
And it sounds just like the perfect mix for the perfect romance

Very sensual
Gentle
And truly kind
Great job

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Nisreenaa

[alf]

Hi John. Well sizzled!!!!!!!!!! Love this. A very gentle portrayal of deep passion, served so humbly and reverently!!! Makes me wish I was a 'fair maid' . . . sort of!! to have the wounds of one's heart repaired by this author sound the epitome of utopia!!! Loved it, alf

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you for such kindness Alf Truly.

[alf]

Got to explain something here, I am never kind, just plain ugly honest!!! being kind in reviews never helped anyone to grow. If I see something wrong, sorry, but I tend to say so!!!

[andrew mitchell]

Yeah you better believe john Alf Is the Poetic Policeman!!!:) And Judge And Jury! I rest my case !! lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Noooo don't do that Andrew, you might fall asleep and you know where that leads lol

[andrew mitchell]

lol................ more No Doze drinks!

[alf]

MMMMMM might have to get myself a patrol car . . .

[andrew mitchell]

lol................. such banter we share. love it!

[alf]

TRUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Perkele.7885]

John, Good pieces, good indeed!

[Kelly Scheppers]

The avatar showing two puzzle pieces connecting was a brilliant showcase for this magnificent piece, John. I especially loved how brief you kept each stanza!

The awe of this cannot be absorbed too much for me!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are so sweet to me Kelly. Thank you so very much.

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sigh....gloriously romantic words, John. A lovely collection. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Lydi!

[Jamestown]

Well written and delivered!
The structure is fantastic and messages are clear and profound,
I really enjoyed the different expressions, well done:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you JT!