Off the Rails

Just Fun!

Off the Rails

There was a young lady called Jude

who was oh so terribly rude

she stripped of her pants

on the fast train to France

and asked if anyone would.

 

05/05/15

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Now that is funny and fun. I have few words as it really does speak for itself.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Wilard. I do try to vary my style as a way of expanding and growing.

[Willard Wells]

It cuts down on boredom too.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

True, so true.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahaha! it is a fine thing to let go the seriousness of things .. poets many times struggle to offer depth and meaning along with everything else .. what a fun ride ... ummmm .. which train is that sir!? ;)
E.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

just a frivolous write and not my usual offering ;lol!

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Another very funny write!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Nadia.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey man take that fast train!

[Tom McRoberts]

Aha, I'm noticing a trend in your recent poetry! Another funny application of the form. I'm beginning to worry about how many unfortunate characters live in your head, John!

[wordman]

you are getting good at this stuff john

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you WM not sure I will be staying in Limerick mode lol

[Jesse]

I wonder how many did, but I'm sure that is in another poem. nice one.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks Jesse

[andrew mitchell]

Yes !!!! Would what! Spit it out man! lol Limericks are juicy fun, John!

[ANTO]

Whats happening today? Has everyone been on the loopy juice? lol
This is a cracking fun side to you John - another string to your bow and you deploy it very well.
Loving this for a wee bit of craic mate. ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Versatility is so underrated Anto. Cheers.

[ANTO]

'tis indeed mo chara, 'tis indeed ! ;)

[AaronFreitas]

Pants are overrated anyways my friend! lol good write :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

True Aaron, thanks.

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would.... mend them? Add rhinestones to them? :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Now do not be so obstinate FT. But thank you!